The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of
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students
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[who are/were] studying abroad in 3 countries from 2000 to 2015.
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,
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while
France
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and America witnessed
the
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upward trends, the opposite was seen in
Russia
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. Notably, the growth rate of
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in the US was the fastest
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In 2001, with 1,5
mill
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million
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, the
number
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of
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studying in America was the lowest, less than
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half of those in
France
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.
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figure increased continuously, surpassing
Russia
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at 2
millions
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million
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in 2005 and
France
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at 2.5
millions
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million
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in 2007
then
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it reached 5
million
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becoming the highest
at the end
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of the observed period.
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, in 2001,
although
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France
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had the highest
number
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of
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students
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with more than 3
million
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, it saw a significant decrease of 2.5
million
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students
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in 2005. After maintaining
this
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level for 5 years, the
number
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of
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students
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in
France
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rose rapidly to 4.5
million
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in 2010.
Vietnamese
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students
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in
Russia
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ranked 2nd with 3
million
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in 2001. 10 years later witnessed a dramatic decline
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the
number
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of
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students
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in
this
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country, hitting
a
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lowest point below 2
million
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students
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. Despite its
students
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grew again from 2010 to 2.5
million
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students
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,
Russia
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was still a country that attracted the least
number
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of
Vietnamese
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students
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, vietnamese, students, france, russia, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • chosen to study
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