The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The presented line chart compares data about how much gold per million Dirham, the UAE money, was sold in Dubai during 2002.
Overall
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, it was important that the trend of Salling reduced over the period of 12 months;
additionally
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, the highest amount was in March;
in contrast
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, the minimum points were in July and September.
According to
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the diagram, at the start, the amount of money that people invest in gold reached 200;
then
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it increased overwhelmingly and hit the vertex at 350 in March
while
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it declined significantly to the same number as the beginning in May. Later it fell moderately and touched the nadir at just over 150 in July. The graph demonstrates that it jumped somewhat to roughly 200 in August;
however
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, it dipped to the same figure as the lowest mark in July.
Nevertheless
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, it leapt slightly to approximately 180 in October after that it climbed but its change did not visually and scored just under 200 in December.
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