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The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canda the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009

The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canda the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009
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The bar chart below illustrates the expenditure proportions for five vital categories in the United
States
, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan throughout 2009.
Overall
, in
United
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the United
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States
 proportions of spending for housing
shows
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show
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considerably
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a considerably
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 high
percentage
 compared to other regions.
Additionally
, spending shares for
heath
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health
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 care and clothing depicted the lowest percentages in all
countries
.
Firstly
, in 2009 the shares of expenditure for housing
was
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were
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 the highest in all
countries
.
For instance
,
in
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apply
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the United
States
 had
the
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a
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percentage
 of over 25%, and the United Kingdom followed closely
to
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with
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 the United
States
 with
the
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a
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 proportion of approximately 24%.
Moreover
, Food was another crucial category of spending, at
this
 time Japan dominated all regions with over 20% and
United
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the United
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States
 displayed
lowest
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the lowest
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percentage
 with under 15%.
On the other hand
,
heath
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health
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 care and clothing accounted for the smallest proportion of spending in every single country.
For example
,
clothing
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the clothing
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percentage
 was under 10% in all regions and Canada depicted the highest proportion compared to other
countries
 with nearly 7%.
Furthermore
, health care
also
 didn't reach
to
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apply
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10%,
as
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and
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 well United
States
 overshadowed other
countries
 with roughly 8%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words states, percentage, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicted" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 5 times.
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