You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities Write at least 150 words.
Dear
Mikle
Jackson,
Hope Correct your spelling
Mike
this
email finds you well, I am writing to express my positive thoughts about your performance and ask for your advice as a beginner signer for band
“Sonya”.
I have recently visited your concert in New York and would like to express my gratitude for organizing Correct article usage
the band
such
a beautiful event. Eventhough
there were other singers performing, your performance was my favourite one. Correct your spelling
Even though
Thw
whole performance was very inspiring, it was especially fascinating how you Correct your spelling
The
combine
advanced choreography and signing Wrong verb form
combined
while
also
maintain
the breath.
For a Wrong verb form
maintaining
while
me
and my Change the pronoun
I
band
have been trying to build music
career, so Add an article
a music
me
and my friends created a Change the pronoun
I
band
that is
called “Sonya”. We are inspired by R&B and Jazz music. We perform in local bars and dream about being recognized around the worlds
as you are.
Our Fix the agreement mistake
world
band
would highly appreciate if
you could give Correct pronoun usage
it if
as
Correct your spelling
us
an advice
for Remove the article
advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
achiving
our dream in Correct your spelling
achieving
archiving
music
industry. As a professional artist anything you say would be taken very seriously and we would be on cloud seven if you would be able to direct ‘’Sonya’’ in the right course.
Me and ‘Sonya’ are looking forward Add an article
the music
for
your response.
Truly yours,
Britney SalivanChange preposition
to
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task achievement
Pay attention to minor grammar and spelling issues, such as 'signing' instead of 'singing' and 'achiving' instead of 'achieving', to enhance clarity and professionalism.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. For instance, the paragraph discussing your musical activities and the band's dreams can be split for clarity.
task achievement
The letter effectively conveys admiration and appreciation for the singer's performance, which addresses the task achievement criterion well.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitably respectful and conveys enthusiasm, which is appropriate for a letter to a professional singer.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, introduction, body with detailed ideas, and a closing, demonstrating good coherence and cohesion.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,