The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar charts represent the average human nutrition
intake
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in four areas of the world, specifically focusing on
protein
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and calories.
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, it can be seen that North American societies had the highest calorie
intake
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with animal
proteins
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domination. Meanwhile, India recorded the lowest consumption of animal
protein
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, resulting
the
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in the
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smallest average
of
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apply
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calorie
intake
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. Looking in more detail, animal
protein
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dominated in four different regions with North
America
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leading
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consumption, reaching 62% of the total average
protein
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intake
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,
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that of Latin
America
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's population was halved.
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in other sources of
protein
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,
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region accounted for 18% followed by the people of Latin
America
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with 5% less,
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East Africa and India shared a similar proportion at 15%. In the calorie
intake
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graph,
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North
America
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continued to have the majority average at approximately 3500 calories,
this
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figure was only 700 higher than Latin
America
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. The figure for the remaining two regions,
on the other hand
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, differed by just 100 calories, with East Africa having a slightly higher surplus.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words intake, protein, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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