The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weeked. Do you agree or disagree?

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society related the working week should be shorter and

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longer

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is interesting to discuss. I argue that

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should be seen as a positive movement because of the possibility of great productivity for the

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a well days off. The

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decreasing the working hours

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will help the

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to take a rest. Numerous research stated that by working overtime the working of our brain will slightly decline throughout the

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as an effect of stress.

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, many

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tend to get pushed to do the work in an insane working culture and environment that

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the brain to work under negative circumstances.

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, by cutting the working week of the

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it will increase their productivity since the brain and physics of the

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will get enough and proper rest. The

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who got a longer weekend will likely spend their time

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or spend their time with their loved

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of satisfaction of employee

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highly rose that definitely might affect their work in

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way. For the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe it is important to give the employee

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proper working hours and longer

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will help them to be more fit and ready to give their contributions back to the company in

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best way.