The chart below shows the resuits of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.Summarise the information by seiecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart provides information in terms of the percentages of citizen who buy
coffee
and tea and also
their drinking habits in five different regions in Australia.
Overall
, at first glance, it becomes clear that Hobart
had the highest proportion of buying both fresh and instant
coffee
, while
the highest average of people
who went to cafes for coffee
or tea were in both Hobart
and Melbourne regions.
It is evident that the percentage
of people
who bought fresh coffee
was lower than that of instant
coffee
, whithin
all regions . Correct your spelling
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Moreover
, In all cities, people
prefer to go to cafes for drinking. In Sydney, while
the percentage
of people
interested in buying fresh coffee
was nearly 45%, the percentage
of those who bought instant
coffee
was a bit higher, nearly 47%.Additionally
, in Melbourne and Brisbane, the percentages of people
.
Conversely
, the percentage
of individuals who bought fresh coffee
in Adelaide city was 35 per cent, much lower than those of in
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Hobart
. In contrast
, a sizeable proportion of people
in Hobart
bought instant
coffee
in the last
4 weeks, reaching nearly 55%.Submitted by mahanz on
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