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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the sources of
energy
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production
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 (coal, nuclear, petrol, gas, and others) in a country in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, coal remained the dominant source of
energy
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 in both years, followed by gas and petrol. Notably, petrol was the only source to see a decrease in
energy
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production
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 over the 10-year period. Specifically, petrol’s
energy
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production
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 dropped by nearly 11%, from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005.
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, the “others” category nearly doubled its share, increasing from 4.90% to 9.10%. Meanwhile, coal and gas
production
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 saw modest increases of about 1%, reaching 30.93% and 30.31%, respectively. Nuclear
energy
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production
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also
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 grew from 6.40% to 10.10% over the same period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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