The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The pie charts illustrate the proportion in normal diets of

Sodium

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, Saturated fat, and Added

Sugar

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, which are not good for health if not consumed properly.

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, a significant amount of

Sodium

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, and Saturated fat are included in dinner,

while

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most of the Added

sugar

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are

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in snacks.

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, breakfast has the minimum fractions of all three unhealthy nutrients. Dinner owns the largest segment of

Sodium

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, and Saturated fat, accounting for 43%, and 37% of the total respectively.

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, only 23 per cent of Added

sugar

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is in dinner.

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, the greatest percentage of Added

Sugar

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, just over two-fifths of the total, is contained in snacks.

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, it has a minimum of 14%

Sodium

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, and just over a fifth of Saturated fat. The data indicates that average portions of three ingredients are added to lunch, comprising 29%, 26%, and 19% of

Sodium

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, Saturated fat, and Added

Sugar

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, respectively.

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, only around 15% of each component is recorded in breakfast, leaving it as the meal with the least unwanted nutrients.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

169 words

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