Mrs Barreet, an English-Speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day up to next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barreet. In your letter 1. Suggest how you could help her in her home 2. Say why you would like to do this work 3. Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Bareet, I am Francis living in

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Coimbatore city. Recently, I have seen an advertisement in a newspaper that article was published by you, it was about a job in your home activity. I mentioned everything in

this

letter, why I really need

this

job. I cook very well and the items like salads, soups, boiled rice with vegetable gravy. Especially, mushroom Manchurian. Not only

this

, I can do vessel washing as well.

Moreover

, I can go for pay electricity, groceries and

also

bank

works

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. So these all I can do

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. I would to do like

this

job because I need money for my college fee.

And

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also

, I have to purchase a bike for my personal usage purposes.

Lastly

, I really well know English (I am

doing

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English literature) it will

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really

helps

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you, we can easily communicate together. My available times are Monday to Saturday

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10 am to 1 pm, if anything

need

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is needed

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Sunday let me know,

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will keep

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you well. I am eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback. Yours truthfully, FRANCIS J.P

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coherence cohesion

Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. This will improve the readability and coherence of your response.

task achievement

Include a brief introduction to make the purpose of the letter clear from the beginning.

task achievement

You addressed each of the points in the task: how you can help, why you want the job, and your availability.

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Your tone is polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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