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The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The illustration displays the amount of owning
cars
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 in one
contry
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country
 from 1995 and 2015.
In addition
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, it
also
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 shows
a
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apply
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presumptive data for
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year
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the year
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 2025. On the given data people who
owns
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own
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 one car remain to be in the highest rank with a total percentage of nearly 48% for 3 consecutive years from 1995 to 2015.
While
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,there
is
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was
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 a
remarkable slightly
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remarkably slight
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 increase in the percentage of people who
owns
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own
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 two or more
cars
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for
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by at
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atleast
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least
 30% in
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year
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the year
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 2015.
Moreover
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, commuters
presents
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present
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 a slight decrease in trend from 1995 to 2015 for approximately 20%.
Overall
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,it can be seen in the prediction by
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year
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the year
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 2025 that there is a huge
diffrence
Correct your spelling
difference
 in the ranking percentage of car owners .
Were individuals
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Individuals
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 who
owns
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own
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 two or more
cars
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ranks
Correct subject-verb agreement
rank
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 at the top with an
overall
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 total of 40% ,
while
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 people who use single
cars
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ranks
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rank
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as
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apply
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its
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the
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 lowest
for
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at
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 about 28% by
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year
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the year
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 2025
.
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?
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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