The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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the highest 15 rice-producing

contries

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countries

in the world in 2015.

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, it is noticeable that China and India were

biggest

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two contributors, were Brazil and Japan had the lightest weight.

firstly

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, China harvested over 140000

thousands ton

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of rice, followed by India, which lags behind in second place with production hovering around 100000.

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, the collective amount of the countries in the leading two ranks

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nearly

equevalent

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equivalent

to what the remaining countries could allocate.

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, 4 regions gathered similar amounts within the same trailing year

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Indoneshia

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Indonesia

Bangladsh

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Bangladesh

Veitnam

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Vietnam

, and

Thiland

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Thailand

, with values ranging from 30000 to 20000 following the same order.

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, as Brazil and Japan arrived

last

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, they were both exactly 10000 short compared to Banama and

Philipenes

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Philippines

who could afford their people roughly enough food that year.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

136 words

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The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

As a consequence of improved medical care, people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Don you think it's disadvantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To whtat extent do you agree or disagree?

One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision