The line graph below shows who Americans spend their time with, by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below illustrates who Americans spend their
time
with, by different groups of age per hour in one day. It is clear that
often American society prefers to stay alone. In contrast
, spending time
with friends is the lowest compared to other people.
To begin
with, spending time
with friends and family has similar hours
by around 1-3 hours
per day. In addition
, expending
Verb problem
spending
time
with a partner is not that important for adults. But, old people like to specification about 3-4.5 hours
per day. Furthermore
, coworkers hanging out time
increased just in Correct article usage
the adults
adults
line to 3 Change the noun form
adult
hours
.
On the other hand
, one noticeable thing is the alone time
section. It is the highest average for all group ages except teenagers. It starts with 3 hours
for under 20 years old until 8 hours
for elderly people. The last
one is the children part. It has an
increased from 30 years old to 40 years old. And it's not a sudden because they almost have Correct article usage
apply
a
kidsCorrect article usage
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