The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selectting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
the graph illustrates that
electricity
is generated from one kind of coal.
Overall
, the process contains several complex stages, beginning with coal being exploited, and ending with electricity
being transacted to residents or factories.
In the first stage, these pieces of big coal are exploited from the mine areas; and then
sent to the specialized machines to crush it into the grinds. Afterward
, the mass coal is transported to the gasifier for heating at high degrees to produce the Change the spelling
Afterwards
gas
.
In the subsequent stage, the gas
is sent to the other factory for cooling, and the high-heat gas
is emitted outside by chimneys. In the next stage, the hot air is sent to the cleaning treatment through pipes, before generating electricity
and continuing to be wasted heat in the gas
power plant. Finally
, the electricity
is sold to households and industrial consumers.Submitted by kyobi46455 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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