The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

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gives

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information about the figures of people who consumed 5

portions

of fruits and vegetables each day in the UK between 2001 and 2008

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, men,

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portions

of fruits and vegetables to

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, women and

children

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increased over the period of 7 years,

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consumed 5

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level compared with

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and

children

In 2001, 5

portions

eaten by men and

children

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18% and 12% respectively. The percentage of consumption for

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remained stable for 3 years at 18%,

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it saw an increase in percentage to 35% in 2006

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and collapsed rapidly to 30% in 2008.

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consumed a figure of 12% during 3 years

then

increased sharply to 28% in 2006 and decreased to 23% in 2008 The

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percentage

of

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who ate 5

portions

was the highest rate. In 2001, the percentage was roughly 21%,

then

rocketed considerably to 35% in 2006 and

finally

fell to exactly 30% in 2008