The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The given bar chart illustrates the rate of a variety of
age
groups in both genders participating in regular sports in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of females doing exercise was higher in most ages except the
age
range of 15 to 24 years old. Regarding the percentage of women engaging in frequent exercise, the middle-aged - who were from 35 to under 65 were the most committed to physical activity. Specifically, approximately 53% of Australian women take part in regular workouts.
However
, the youngsters and the older were the opposite cases, these were the two
age
groups with the lowest rates, which were 47.7% and 47.1%, respectively. Turning to the proportion of males joining in sports, teenagers and youngsters under 24 years old were the most active group in keeping fit, which accounted for roughly 53%.
Next,
men at the working
age
- from 25 to 64 - were concerned less about maintaining health as only around 40 to 45
percent
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of males at these ages did exercise regularly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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