The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activitiy in 2010

The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activitiy in 2010
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The given bar chart illustrates the
proportion
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of Australian males and females who regularly participated in outdoor
activity
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in 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
percentage
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of
women
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engaging in physical
activity
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was an upward trend in all age groups,
while
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the participation rate for
men
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fluctuated substantially. In terms of outdoor
activity
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participation from 15 to 24, we can see that the
proportion
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of males was higher than the
proportion
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of females. From 25 to 34, we see the
percentage
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of both genders fluctuating at 42,2% and 48,9% for
men
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and
women
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, respectively.
Moreover
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, from 35 to 44, the
percentage
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of males decreased to 39,5% and the
percentage
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of females increased to 52,5%.
In addition
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, both genders were more active in the age group of 45 to 54 than their previous age and they reached 43,1% and 53,3% for male and female. Related to physical
activity
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participation from 55 to 64, the
percentage
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of
men
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has climbed by 2% and the
proportion
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of
women
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has dropped by 0,3%. In the
last
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group, from 65 and over, we can see approximately the
activity
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for
women
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and
men
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, that 0,4% of
women
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are more than
men
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, activity, percentage, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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