The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activitiy in 2010

The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activitiy in 2010
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The given bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of Australian males and females who regularly participated in outdoor
activity
in 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
percentage
of
women
engaging in physical
activity
was an upward trend in all age groups,
while
the participation rate for
men
fluctuated substantially. In terms of outdoor
activity
participation from 15 to 24, we can see that the
proportion
of males was higher than the
proportion
of females. From 25 to 34, we see the
percentage
of both genders fluctuating at 42,2% and 48,9% for
men
and
women
, respectively.
Moreover
, from 35 to 44, the
percentage
of males decreased to 39,5% and the
percentage
of females increased to 52,5%.
In addition
, both genders were more active in the age group of 45 to 54 than their previous age and they reached 43,1% and 53,3% for male and female. Related to physical
activity
participation from 55 to 64, the
percentage
of
men
has climbed by 2% and the
proportion
of
women
has dropped by 0,3%. In the
last
group, from 65 and over, we can see approximately the
activity
for
women
and
men
, that 0,4% of
women
are more than
men
.
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