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The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate four
society
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societies
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 (
India
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, Sweden, Morocco,
Vietnam
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), which produced
electricity
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 with usage
three
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of three
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 different categories of
soursec
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sources
 (Fossil fuel,
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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, Nuclear
power
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),
energy
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 from 2003 to 2008. The units are measured in
percantge
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percentage
percentages
.
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, in
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general
generally
generall
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generall,
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 the amount of
use
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 of nuclear
power
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 is
lowest
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the lowest
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 per cent and
it is clear that
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 the most significant
energy
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 that
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use
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is used
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in produced
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to produce
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electricity
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was
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is
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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. In two
counties
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countries
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 (
Morocoo
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Morocco
 and
Vietnam
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), there
are
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is
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 no rate of nuclear
energy
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 to
product
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produce
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the
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apply
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electricity
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. In terms of
India
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 and Sweden, in
India
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 the most substantial
power
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 was Fossil
feul
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fuel
feel
 and
it
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is
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 comprised
of
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apply
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82% per cent
also
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 the number of
Hydro
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power
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 was 14% and the remaining chunk of
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sources
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source
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power
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 was for nuclear
power
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 with 4%. Regarding
to
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apply
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Sweden, a
graduall
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gradually
gradual
 different in
proportion
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the proportion
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 of 2
sources
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 (
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Hydropower
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Hydro
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power
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 and Nuclear
energy
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) can be seen and
fee
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a fee
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of
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for
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 2
sources
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 was 52% and 44% respectively
in addition
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 fossil
feul
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fuel
 accounted for 4% in the period given. With regards to the remaining society, in
Morocco
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Morocco,
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 there is no operation of
neclear
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nuclear
energy
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 and the most
sources
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 to
made
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electricity
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 was
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 with 95% in the given period
furthermore
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 fossil fuel was the lowest
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sources
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source
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 in
India
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 to
made
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make
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electricity
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 during the period question with just 5%. About
Vietnam
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,
similary
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similarly
similar
 to Morocco in
this
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 country (
Vietnam
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), the society did not
use
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of
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apply
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Nuclear
eneregy
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energy
 to produce
electricity
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 what is more
allowner
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all owner
owner
 of Fossil fuel was little more than
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use
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the use
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 of
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 to produced
electricity
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 with 56% and 44% respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words india, vietnam, electricity, hydro, power, energy, use, sources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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