The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The diagrams below depict the life circle of a silkworm and the steps in the manufacture of the
silk
cloth.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent, that both processes are divided into several particular stages.
The Linking Words
process
of formation and life cycle of the silkworm starts from the laying of eggs by the mother worm. After 10 days of the maturing the larva generate. The silkworm larva consumes mulberry leavesUse synonyms
,
and grows for 4 to 6 weeks. After the nymph is ready for another step, where Remove the comma
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silk
threads are produced and after 3-8 days larva makes the cocoon. The final step is the ageing Use synonyms
process
which lasts 16 days and forms the moth.
The second diagram shows the production of the Use synonyms
silk
cloth. There are particular stages in Use synonyms
this
technique.
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First,
is the action of Linking Words
the
selecting Correct article usage
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silk
shells Use synonyms
with
good quality and boiling them. Change preposition
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Then
shells enter to unwind Linking Words
process
where 300-400 m. threads are produced followed by twisting and weaving steps. Both of these stages Use synonyms
are
participated Unnecessary verb
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also
in the dying Linking Words
process
in dyers for making specific Use synonyms
colors
.Change the spelling
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