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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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asking
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by asking
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 people in the streets of Montreal about McGill
Univerisity
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University
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 in 2005, 2010 and 2015.
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, it is noticeable that facilities related to study improved
throught
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through
throughout
 the years
while
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 the offer of modules decreased. Taking a closer look at the table it can be said opinions from people related to almost
topic
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every topic
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 changed from one year to another;
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, sports and social facilities remained stable in that period with the support of more than half of the respondents. Others like teaching quality and library resources fluctuated in that period, reaching the peak of
student's
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student
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 satisfaction in 2015 and 2010, respectively.
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, student services rocketed their popularity from 54 to 95
percent
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 in 10 years. Oppositely, the range of modules offered did not
satisfied
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students
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students'
student's
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 expectations, as
result
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a result
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, it suffered a fall of nearly 14%. To summarize, Montreal citizens are happy with
McGill
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McGill's
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 decisions about teaching and the resources offered by the university, but consider that more degrees should be
teached
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taught
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.
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