The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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cement

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production

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process and the

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the

cement

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in concrete manufacture. From an

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perspective, it is readily apparent, that both

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processes have some particular stages. As is presented in the first picture, the first step in

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cement

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production

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is the blending of the limestone and the clay, the next stage is the crushing

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raw materials by

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mechanism. When the mix of limestone and clay is ready, they go through

mixer

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for stirring and after by pipe

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to the rotating heater. The material

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high

temperature

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and should be

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after by

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the grinder

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tool.

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, there is the

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as a final product which should be packed in bags and ready for

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. The next graph depicts

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concrete

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. The substance consists

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four products:15%

cement

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, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% of gravel. All

is

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mixed in the concrete mixer and make concrete as a

production

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in the output.