The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrams show the several stages of the
cement
production
process and the using
the Replace the word
use
cement
in concrete manufacture.
From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent, that both of
processes have some particular stages.
As is presented in the first picture, the first step in Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
cement
production
is the blending of the limestone and the clay, the next stage is the crushing both
raw materials by Change preposition
of both
special
mechanism. When the mix of limestone and clay is ready, they go through Correct article usage
a special
mixer
for stirring and after by pipe Add an article
the mixer
follow
to the rotating heater. The material Wrong verb form
followed
exposed
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is exposed
by
high Change preposition
to
temperature
and should be Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
grind
after by Add an article
a grind
grinder
tool. Correct article usage
the grinder
Finally
, there is the cement
as a final product which should be packed in bags and ready for consuming
.
The next graph depicts Replace the word
consumption
the
concrete Correct article usage
apply
production
. The substance consists from
four products:15% Change preposition
of
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% of gravel. All is
mixed in the concrete mixer and make concrete as a Change the verb form
are
production
in the output.Submitted by nairaaliyarova on
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