You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter: Remind your employer what the course was about Explain why the course was useful to you in your work Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

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Dear
sir
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or mam. I am formally writing
this
letter to provide you with my honest feedback,
regading
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regarding
to the training
course
I recently attended.
Firstly
, I am going to tell you
that
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what
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my
course
name was. Complete orthodontics. It included 4 sessions
of
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on
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how to align,
malocclusion
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and malocclusion
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and I gained a lot of expertise. As a matter of
fact
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I joined
this
course
after realizing that my skills in
othodontics
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orthodontics
are not better but now I can confidently handle my patients.
In
addition
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your skills guided me a lot,
that
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and
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now I can handle
patients
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patients'
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malocclusion.
Although
this
course
is not designed for every dentist
for
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who
is
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not graduated yet.
Furthermore
, minimum dentists are inclined towards orthodontics. Yours faithfully. DR.Umar
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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