Write a letter to your manager to report a mistake you found in a magazine article about your company In your letter • Describe the magazine and the article. • What was the mistake? • Explain what you would like the manager to do about it.

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Dear Mr. Rohit, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that our company magazine's article is wrong. Yesterday I was free, so I started to read our company magazine.
This
article is written by Mr. Ravi on
2nd
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the 2nd
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of December.
Furthermore
, I read that our company's product label is wrong.
It's
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Its
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name is
sunshine
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Sunshine
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but he
write
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wrote
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funshine
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Funshine
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.
Also
, the expiry date of our product is 2 years after
open
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opening
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it but he write, it
expired
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expires
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within 6 months after
open
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opening
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. It
put
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has
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bad
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a bad
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impact on our customers. Despite
this
, I have a suggestion to correct it. You have to inform Mr. Ravi so that he can correct that name and expiry date, so hopefully our sales will increase. I'd be grateful if you correct
this
article by
inform
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informing
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our writer. Thanks in advance,
Your
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sincerely, Raj
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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