You are lookinf for a part time job. Write a letter to an employment agency.

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Dear hiring team, I am writing
this
letter to express my intention to work with your employment agency. I am Harshalika Singh and recently
got
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apply
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graduated in Business. I am looking forward to
work
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working
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as a
book keeper
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bookkeeper
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in your agency. I possess good
data keeping
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and
date entry
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skills and can handle all the transactions of your agency. I have
got
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apply
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a good amount of experience
by
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apply
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working as a data handler in a firm and worked almost 2 years. I have good time management and communication skills that can help you to attract a number of clients. I will look forward to
hear
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from you. Yours
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Harshalika Singh
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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