The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Islip like any small town is no stranger to growth and
developpement
, in the plans above we can see the future modifications and features that might be Correct your spelling
development
implant it
, the following paragraphs will highlight them.
As of now the city Verb problem
implemented
center
where the shopping Change the spelling
centre
area
is located, is divided by a main road that grants access to that area
, the split down the middle of that shopping area
makes it easily accessible by car
, but not that safe for pedestrians. We can also
notice that there is a housing area
behind the shops, located in between a school south west
and a park Correct your spelling
southwest
east west
, Add a hyphen
east-west
conviently
close to the residential Correct your spelling
conveniently
area
.
In the new development plan, what used to be a
countryside up north will be converted to a dual carriageway, Correct article usage
the
encercling
the city and taking the Correct your spelling
encircling
car
around the shopping area
making it pedestrian friendly and eliminating any potential car
traffic jams. The shops that were located up north will also
be condenced
in a shopping centre, allowing us to build a bus station Correct your spelling
condensed
north west
and a Add a hyphen
north-west
car
parking east to the shopping center
making it easily accessible. The rest of the street will be converted Change the spelling
centre
to
a new housing Change preposition
into
area
with direct access to the new road.
The new plan also
allows use
to make the most out of the empty land, and convert it to new housing areas Correct your spelling
us
in addition
to the old ones, while
keeping the school and the park almost in the same areas but allowing better access to them by car
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