Many students are now refusing to choose science subjects at their university level. Why do you think this is happening and what is the impact on the community?

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students

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picking up

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majors

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university. What is the cause of

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tendency and how does that influence

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society? Countless

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shy away from scientific subjects

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the university.

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tendancy

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might be encouraged by the increasing difficulty of the matters and the constant evolution in

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, making

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only hard to keep up with the progress but

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tedious to grasp the field.

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many professors changed their teaching techniques, once described as strict and narrow-minded, there is no denying that the reputation of some

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be a major turn-off to these young knowledge seekers. Sciences are the

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of many essential and daily activities and human needs. To explain

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science

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is the basis for healthcare, economy and

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architecture

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students

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these subjects, the less qualified doctors and engineers are available.

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would put the community in a vulnerable state, in which housing and

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become a rare currency and commodity. In my opinion, studying

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is challenging, difficult and takes

alot

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a lot

of mental and physical effort. Establishing new teaching techniques, facilitating the courses and

addapting

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adapting

them to the different mental capacities

students

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might have, might help encourage

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to join these programmes.

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Topic Vocabulary:

STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
Lack of passion
Career prospects
Lucrative
Prestigious
Rote learning
Critical thinking
Shortage of qualified professionals
Sector
Scientific advancements
Economic growth
Job creation
Foster
Enthusiasm
Engaging
Relevant
Initiatives
Societal values

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Many students are now refusing to choose science subjects at their university level. Why do you think this is happening and what is the impact on the community?

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In many countries today, everyday necessities like food and petrol have become very expensive. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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