The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked   visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer  service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the  years 2005 and 2010
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the
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of a form where 100 different customers were asked about
service
in the Parkway Hotel and how they would rate it.
This
questionnaire was in 2005 and after 5 years the experiment was repeated.
Overall
, there are significant
difference
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between 2005 and 2010, the guest rating for client assistance was excellent, about 28%,
whereas
the rating in 2005 sharply decreased to 5%. In 2005, 45% of
guests
expressed satisfaction and rated the prospect account positively;
however
, by 2010,
this
figure had dropped significantly to 17%. Comparatively, the proportion of
guests
rating customer
service
as "very poor" decreased over the period, falling from 15% in 2005 to just 4% in 2010.
Conversely
, the percentage of
guests
who rated customer
service
as "good" rose significantly, starting at 14% in 2005 and increasing by 25%. Regarding "poor" ratings, the percentage stood at 21% in 2005 but declined to 12% in 2010. The data highlights noticeable changes in
guests
' ratings of customer
service
over the given period.
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