Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

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Urban migration has become
the
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unevitable
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inevitable
trend in today's centralized society. Many people from rural
areas
opt
for giving
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up their rural
areas
lifestyle
instead
of
pursuring
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pursuing
their living in urban
areas
,
esepcially
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especially
mega cities like New York, Shanghai etc.
Nevertheless
, intensive migration from rural
areas
tourban
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to urban
areas
has
also
led to issues like
housing
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crisis, skyrocketing
crime
rates ,
as well as
assimilation problems,
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anlayze
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analyse
the issues I mentioned above. With
large
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a large
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increasing
number of
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population
flood into
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the
city
, limited housing
areas
cannot stand
for
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large flows of people and many houses
has
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been occupied by real estate developers,
in
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which
lead
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leads
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to overly high renting prices in
city's
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the city's
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residential
areas
. In
contreast
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contrast
with
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exhiralting
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the
high prices, Migrant
workers
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worker's
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low wages seem cannot afford them.
According to
one of the South
asian
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descent migrant workers working in Toronto, he mentioned that five people
share
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a
cramping
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room for sleeping has become a common trend for most of
Toronto
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South
asian
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descent migrant workers. Skyrocketing
crime
rate
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rates
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during the process of migration
also
cannot be
overkooked
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overlooked
overcooked
.
Due to
the economic
discrenpency
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discrepancy
between migrant
labours
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and
city
dwellers
as well as
systmatic
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systematic
discrimiantion
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discrimination
towards immigrant
labours
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labourers
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, some extreme migrant
wokers
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workers
resolve to fix their financial difficulties via
comittting
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committing
the
crime
,
such
as robbery
on
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the train stations, scamming
city
dwellers, thereby increasing
the
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city
's
overall
crime
rate. Their
assilmiation
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assimilation
process
also
cannot be ignored
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • rural depopulation
  • economic opportunities
  • infrastructure
  • livelihoods
  • overpopulation
  • cultural integration
  • affordability
  • public services
  • housing prices
  • workforce
  • economic growth
  • cultural diversity
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • basic services
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