The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
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The charts present the proportion of British
students
at one university in England who were able to speak other
languages
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2000, the amount of
students
who can speak other
languages
increased in 2010. Spanish is the most common language that
students
can speak, and
students
who only speak English are receding through the period.
Furthermore
, in 2000, university members that can speak Spanish were increased from 30% in 2000 to at 35% in 2010. The following percentage for French rose from 15% in 2000 to 20% in 2010.
Then
, the number of
students
who could use Germany was all the same at that time at 10%.
Moreover
, there are groups of
students
that can speak other
languages
were rose from 15% in 2000 to 20% in 2010.
also
, they even have
students
who can speak 2
languages
and they grew from just 10% in 2000 to 15% in 2010. And the
last
, members that only speak English fell from 20% to just 10% in 2010.
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