The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportions of men and female employed in four countries in two different years. At first sight, we can divide the four countries into two groups: the first group contains Japan and the USA, with a significant percentage of employees,
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the second group involves Australia and Belgium, which had the lowest amount employees.
Firstly
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, the comparison in the first band. Japan showed a peak of men that were with job in 1970 with 84%, and
this
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country had the largest proportion of women that were hired with 43 % in 1970.
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, the USA had the highest amount of employed guys in 1970 and women in 2000.
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, more details of the second band. It can be seen that Australia decreased the percentage of gentlemen workers and increased the proportion of females during the time of the study,
on the other hand
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, Belgium had a peak of gentlemen employers in 1970 with 79% and a lowdown of ladies in 2000 with 7%.
To sum up
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, the diagrams show different percentages of old people with work in 1970 and 2000 in different nations.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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