The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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we can see Add a comma
diagram,
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monarch
butterfly and Correct article usage
the monarch
it's
life cycle. It's clear from Correct your spelling
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this
graph that Linking Words
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the monarch
go
through many changes of development throughout its life cycle. Change the verb form
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what it's
shown, we can see that Correct pronoun usage
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butterfly
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butterflies
develops
as eggs on milkweed and Wrong verb form
develop
grows
to newly hatched larva after 14 days. The caterpillar Correct subject-verb agreement
grow
attach
itself to the milkweed to go through Change the verb form
attaches
larval
stage which is important for its development Add an article
the larval
and
during Correct word choice
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time chrysalis Linking Words
cover
the caterpillar for 10 days. The Change the verb form
covers
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butterfly is Use synonyms
finally
hatched into its adulthood to migrate to the north to mate with other Linking Words
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butterflies and Use synonyms
lays
its eggs. after looking at the life cycle of Correct your spelling
lay
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butterfly we could say that throughout Correct article usage
the monarch
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butterfly Use synonyms
develope
in Correct your spelling
develops
very
fascinating and interesting on its own starting from it being Correct article usage
a very
small
egg on milkweed to it being Correct article usage
a small
fully
grown Correct article usage
a fully
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butterfly.Use synonyms
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