The bar graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Uniten kingdom, Sweden, Portugal, Italy between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the main point and make comparison where relavant.
The given line graph illustrates the average
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person in four countries, the UK, Sweden, Portugal and Italy from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the carbon
dioxide
emissions
in Italy and Portugal increased while
after a sharp increase carbon
dioxide
emissions
decreased in Sweden. Moreover
, in the UK, the carbon
emissions
was
the highest among all countries, and Change the verb form
were
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
also
decreased slightly throughout the period.
In Italy, in 1967, carbon
dioxide
emissions
was
around 4.4 metric Change the verb form
were
tonnes
, and it increased to above 6 metric tonnes
after 10 years in 1977. It increased to
slightly over the period and reached below 8 metric Change preposition
apply
tonnes
in 2007. In addition
, Carbon
dioxide
emssions
Correct your spelling
emissions
emission
was
below 2 metric Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tonnes
in Portugal in 1967, and then
, it increased, and after that
with a slight decline it reached around 5.7 metric Add a comma
that,
tonnes
in 1997. In 2007, it slightly rose and reached approximately 5.8 metric tonnes
. Meanwhile, in Sweden, the carbon
dioxide
emssions
stood at around 8.5 metric Correct your spelling
emissions
tonnes
, and it sharply increased to roughly 10.2 metric tonnes
after ten years, and then
experienced a sharp decline and recahed
around 7 million. In 2007, it reached around 5.2 metric Correct your spelling
reached
tonnes
.
In the UK, the CO2 emissions
was
the highest among all countries and that was above Change the verb form
were
aound
11 metric Correct your spelling
around
tonnes
in 1967. It slighly
decreased throughout the Correct your spelling
slightly
perod
and reached approximately 8.9 metric Correct your spelling
period
tonnes
in 2007.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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