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The given line graph illustrates teh clothing exports from 1990 to 2003 in Colombia, Japan and Mayamar. Summarize main feature nad make comparison where relavent.

The given line graph illustrates teh clothing exports from 1990 to 2003 in Colombia, Japan and Mayamar. Summarize main feature nad make comparison where relavent.
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The given line chart illustrates the clothing
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exports
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 from 1999 to 2003 in three different countries Colombia,
Mayanmar
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Myanmar
 and Japan.
Overall
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, in Myanmar, the
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 experienced
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increase
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 with one dramatic decrease throughout the period. Meanwhile, in Japan, exports experienced a decline. In Colombia,
the
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export
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 experienced an
increase
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. In 1999, in Myanmar, the
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export
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 stood at around 0
million
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dollars
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,
however
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, in 2000,
it
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 experienced a dramatic
increase
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 and reached around 800
million
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dollars
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. In 2001, it experienced another
increase
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 and reached above 900
million
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dollars
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.
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, in the next year, 2002, the
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 dramatically decreased to approximately 330
million
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dollars
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 in Myanmar.
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, in 1999, the
export
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 of clothing in Colombia started from approximately 470
million
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dollars
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, and it increased to around 700
million
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dollars
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 in 2002. It slightly decreased after that and reached roughly 600
million
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dollars
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 in 2003. In Japan,
on the other hand
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, the
export
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 of
clohing
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clothing
 stood at below 600
million
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dollars
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 in 1999, and in 2003, it declined to below 5
million
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dollars
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, increase, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 3 times.
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