The given line graph illustrates teh clothing exports from 1990 to 2003 in Colombia, Japan and Mayamar. Summarize main feature nad make comparison where relavent.

The given line graph illustrates teh clothing exports from 1990 to 2003 in Colombia, Japan and Mayamar. 

Summarize main feature nad make comparison where relavent.
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The given line chart illustrates the clothing
export
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exports
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from 1999 to 2003 in three different countries Colombia,
Mayanmar
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Myanmar
and Japan.
Overall
, in Myanmar, the
export
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exports
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experienced
increase
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an increase
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with one dramatic decrease throughout the period. Meanwhile, in Japan, exports experienced a decline. In Colombia,
the
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export
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exports
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experienced an
increase
. In 1999, in Myanmar, the
export
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exports
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stood at around 0
million
dollars
,
however
, in 2000,
it
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experienced a dramatic
increase
and reached around 800
million
dollars
. In 2001, it experienced another
increase
and reached above 900
million
dollars
.
In contrast
, in the next year, 2002, the
export
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dramatically decreased to approximately 330
million
dollars
in Myanmar.
Moreover
, in 1999, the
export
of clothing in Colombia started from approximately 470
million
dollars
, and it increased to around 700
million
dollars
in 2002. It slightly decreased after that and reached roughly 600
million
dollars
in 2003. In Japan,
on the other hand
, the
export
of
clohing
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clothing
stood at below 600
million
dollars
in 1999, and in 2003, it declined to below 5
million
dollars
.
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