The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.

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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide (CO2)

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per person in four countries—the United

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, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal—between 1967 and 2007, measured in metric

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while

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in Portugal and Italy increased significantly over the period, the United

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and Sweden experienced substantial declines. In 1967, Portugal had the lowest CO2

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at approximately 1 metric tonne per person, which rose steadily to about 5 metric

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by 2007.

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, Italy’s

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increased from around 4 metric

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in 1967 to nearly 8 metric

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in 1997, after which they stabilized at

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level for the remainder of the period.

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, Sweden and the United

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showed decreasing trends. Sweden’s

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initially

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rose from 9 metric

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in 1967 to a peak of 10 in 1977, before declining sharply to converge with Portugal at approximately 5 metric

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in 2007. The United

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, which started with the highest

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at nearly 11 metric

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in 1967, experienced a steady decline throughout the period, reaching about 5 metric

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by 2007.

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comparison highlights the divergence between increasing

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in Southern Europe and declining levels in Northern Europe.

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