The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.

The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.
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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
per person in four countries—the United
Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal—between 1967 and 2007, measured in metric
tonnes
.
Overall
,
while
emissions
in Portugal and Italy increased significantly over the period, the United
Kingdom
and Sweden experienced substantial declines. In 1967, Portugal had the lowest CO2
emissions
at approximately 1 metric tonne per person, which rose steadily to about 5 metric
tonnes
by 2007.
Similarly
, Italy’s
emissions
increased from around 4 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to nearly 8 metric
tonnes
in 1997, after which they stabilized at
this
level for the remainder of the period.
In contrast
, Sweden and the United
Kingdom
showed decreasing trends. Sweden’s
emissions
initially
rose from 9 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to a peak of 10 in 1977, before declining sharply to converge with Portugal at approximately 5 metric
tonnes
in 2007. The United
Kingdom
, which started with the highest
emissions
at nearly 11 metric
tonnes
in 1967, experienced a steady decline throughout the period, reaching about 5 metric
tonnes
by 2007.
This
comparison highlights the divergence between increasing
emissions
in Southern Europe and declining levels in Northern Europe.
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