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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the
literacy
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 rates estimated in males and females in Africa, the
Americas
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, Asia,
Europe
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 and the
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Ocenia
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Oceania
region
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 from 2000 to 2004
Overall
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, the
Americas
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,
Europe
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 and the
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Ocenia
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Oceania
 areas have higher
literacy
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 rates than in the world for both males and females and
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Europe
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European
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region
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 has the highest rate compared with other areas,
while
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literacy
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 rates in Africa and Asia are lower than the world The
literacy
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 percentages in
Europe
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, the
Americas
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 and the
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Ocenia
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Oceania
was
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 over 90% for
two
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the two
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 gender groups. The figures
of
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 citizens in reading and writing in
Europe
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 accounted for the highest percentage at nearly 99.2% and 98.5% for
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 respectively. the percentages in
literacy
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 in the
Americas
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 and the
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Ocenia
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Oceania
region
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 in the total were similar at approximately 93% .the Asia
region
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 had
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literacy
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 proportions at
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an average
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 level above 79.3%
for
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 total. The female rate in Africa was the lowest rate at 53.9%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words literacy, americas, europe, ocenia, region with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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