The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and

equipment used in the cement making process,

and how cement is used to produce concrete for

building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing
cement
and its use in producing concrete.
Overall
, the first process focuses on
cement
production,
while
the second shows how the
cement
is utilized
along with
other ingredients to manufacture concrete. In the first diagram,
cement
production begins by crushing limestone and clay into a powder using a crusher. These materials are mixed in a mixer,
then
heat is applied
while
they are rotated with the use of a rotating heater. The heated product is
then
ground into a finer powder. The powder is
finally
bagged and ready to be used as
cement
. The second diagram shows how
cement
is vital to the manufacturing of concrete. The operation involves combining 15%
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel in a concrete mixer.gravel refers to small stones, which are the major ingredient in
this
mixture. Once all components are combined, the output is concrete, which is used for construction purposes.
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