The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table shows the nummber of temporary migrant worker in four
countries
in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these
workers
per 1,000
people
in these
countries
in 2006 . From an
overall
perspective, the
countries
taken into view are Australia, New Zealand, United Kingdom and Unites
States
. We see that, the highest count of migrant
workers
was in Unites
States
in 2003 and 2006, rathen New Zealand which is demostrates the lowest migrant
workers
.
To begin
with, after United
States
in 2003 was Australia which is have 152,000
workers
, whilst the United Kingdom was in the third place in 2003 , but after 3 years in 2006 had gradually increasing to the second place of count of migrant
workers
. The minor one is Australia with 65,000 in 2003 and 87,000 in 2006 .
In addition
United
States
has the largest number of migrant with 2.3 per 1000
people
,
while
the New Zealand except the smallest count of migrant , had 21.1 per 1000
people
which is myriad than the other
countries
In conclusion , with that had already been compared, as we can see that the
countries
that have a lot of
workers
, have smallest number in work per 1000
people
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 93%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, workers, people, states with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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