The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph highlights the amount of money consumers spent on 3
services
in the US from 2001 to 2010
Overall
, the figure for expenditure
in national fixed-line
witnessed a downward trend while
the opposite was true in cell
phone
services
. It is obvious that international fixed-line
ones remain stable during that period.
In 2001, consumers' expenditure
for national fixed-line
in the USA reached the highest with 700$ while
cell
phone
services
was the lowest with only 200$. Afterward, there was a dramatic increase in cell
phone
services
while
national fixed-line
services
experienced a reverse trend. In 2006, the amount of money spent on cell
phone
services
and national fixed-line
services
were the same at $500. One year later, the figure for cell
phone
services
experienced a steady rise in cell
phone
usage whereas
national fixed-line
services
still declined. In the first year of 2010s, the amount of money allocated to cell
phone
services
reached about 750$ whereas
that of national fixed-line
services
hit merely $400.
In 2001, the figure for expenditure
on international fixed-line
services
was around $250 and reached its highest point in 2003, at over $300. International fixed-line
services
expenditure
experienced a slight fall to $300 and remained stable to the end of the period.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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