The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the process involved in the reclaiming
aluminium
drinks Use synonyms
cans
.
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Overall
,the process consists of 7 stages,beginning with a collection centre and middle of the process shows Linking Words
aluminium
recycling plant and ending up with drinks machine.
First of all, used aluminiumcansare collected and sorted at the collection centre and divided into two boxes .After that two boxes which is sorted delivered at recycling centre to for Use synonyms
further
reprocessing .In the next stage we can see Linking Words
aluminium
recycling plant which is first melt down old aluminiumas a result come out new Use synonyms
aluminium
.
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Subsequently
new Linking Words
aluminium
turn into a largealuminiumroll.Next from a roll of aliminium come in sight a lot of new Use synonyms
cans
.Use synonyms
Finally
new Linking Words
cans
are send to drinks machine where they are filled and distributedto ready for using again.it is Use synonyms
then
recycledutilized Linking Words
cans
,and the cycle starts again.Use synonyms
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