The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram presents the process involved in the reclaiming
aluminium
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drinks
cans
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.
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,the process consists of 7 stages,beginning with a collection centre and middle of the process shows
aluminium
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recycling plant and ending up with drinks machine. First of all, used aluminiumcansare collected and sorted at the collection centre and divided into two boxes .After that two boxes which is sorted delivered at recycling centre to for
further
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reprocessing .In the next stage we can see
aluminium
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recycling plant which is first melt down old aluminiumas a result come out new
aluminium
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.
Subsequently
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new
aluminium
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turn into a largealuminiumroll.Next from a roll of aliminium come in sight a lot of new
cans
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.
Finally
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new
cans
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are send to drinks machine where they are filled and distributedto ready for using again.it is
then
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recycledutilized
cans
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,and the cycle starts again.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words aluminium, cans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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