The line graph below shows changes in the amount and the type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
line graph gives information about the food and the number
consumption
by Australian kids, between 1975 to 2000.
Replace the word
consumed
Overall
, it is clear from this
line graph that it has different type
of food, Fix the agreement mistake
types
such
like
pizza, fish and chips and Change preposition
as
hamburger
. Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
in addition
, hamburger
went up in Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
number
of kinds Change the article
a number
the number
consume
food. Wrong verb form
consumed
whereas
, fish and chips of how much it was consumed by teenagers.
According to
what it shown, hamburger
rose Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
signficantly
between 1975 with Correct your spelling
significantly
number
of 0 to 2000 as it Change the article
a number
the number
was
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
number
100 of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
consumptions
throughout the years. Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
in contrast
, fish and chips dropped from 100 in 1975 to slightly under 40 in 2000.
in terms of pizza, it slightly rose from 0 in 1975 to 20 in 1980, and it climbed between 1985 to 1990 which is
eventually increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
number
in 2000 year to 80 how much it was eaten per year.Submitted by rnoo95366 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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