The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the development of the village of
Ryemouth
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Tynemouth
between 1995 and now.
Overall
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, the village of Reymouth witnessed significant transformations. Notably, there is an increase in the number of accommodation areas now,
along with
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adding new facilities
such
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as
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a tennis court, a golf playground, and a chain of restaurants.
Firstly
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, the most notable change is the farmland and forest park which were located on the eastern part of the map were eliminated, and a golf area and tennis court were constructed
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.
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, the fishing industry situated on the southern side was cancelled by removing the fishing market and fishing port;
however
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, modern apartments were built
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of the previous fishing market. Despite these changes, the cafe which is located in the lower right corner remained in its position without change.
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, the number of housing which is located on the left hand is increased. The shops on the left hand were removed, and new restaurants were constructed
instead
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of them.
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, the new housing area is connected to the main road by a side street. Ultimately, the hotel which is located on the right hand above the sea remained in its position;
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, a new car park was added right to it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, instead".
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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