The maps show changes in a village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the development of the village of
Ryemouth
between 1995 and now.
Correct your spelling
Tynemouth
Overall
, the village of Reymouth witnessed significant transformations. Notably, there is an increase in the number of accommodation areas now, Linking Words
along with
adding new facilities Linking Words
such
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,
a tennis court, a golf playground, and a chain of restaurants.
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Firstly
, the most notable change is the farmland and forest park which were located on the eastern part of the map were eliminated, and a golf area and tennis court were constructed Linking Words
instead
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Similarly
, the fishing industry situated on the southern side was cancelled by removing the fishing market and fishing port; Linking Words
however
, modern apartments were built Linking Words
instead
of the previous fishing market. Despite these changes, the cafe which is located in the lower right corner remained in its position without change.
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Moreover
, the number of housing which is located on the left hand is increased. The shops on the left hand were removed, and new restaurants were constructed Linking Words
instead
of them. Linking Words
Additionally
, the new housing area is connected to the main road by a side street. Ultimately, the hotel which is located on the right hand above the sea remained in its position; Linking Words
however
, a new car park was added right to it.Linking Words
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