The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make com-parisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make com-parisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides data on the childbirth
rate
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in England among females between 1973 and 2020.
Overall
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, the birthing
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had significantly increased among 28- to 34-year-old females in England,
while
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the 20- to 25-year-old
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group
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showed a drastic drop.
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, the two other
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groups
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remained relatively stable throughout the given period. In 1973, the birth
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in the 20-25
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group
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started at 120, and it was the highest among all
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groups
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. After that, it steadily decreased and stopped at slightly under 20 per 1000 women, reaching third in all
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groups
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. The 28-34
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group
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started at around 20, continued to increase, and surpassed the previous top
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in 2021 and, with 80, gained a top position among all
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groups
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. The under 20 years female
initially
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showed 20 rates and remained relatively stable, reaching just above 20 in 2000. Meanwhile, the forty-plus-year-old women's childbearing
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dropped around 8%, starting at approximately
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10
and ending at a minimal level of 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, age, group, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Birth rate
  • Fluctuating trend
  • Economic factors
  • Family planning methods
  • Societal norms
  • Stabilization
  • Economic conditions
  • Fertility treatments
  • Demographic change
  • Maternal age
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