On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the company – describe the item lost – explain how you lost it – tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is
shital
Patel, I'm from Change the capitalization
Shital
kapadwanj
. I'm
writing Change the capitalization
Kapadwanj
this
letter because,
I recently lost my Remove the comma
apply
gold
chain
. when I went to my brother's marriage that time
I lost my gold
chain
so I request
to cover my Wrong verb form
requested
gold
chain
amount.
My gold
chain
is in round
shape and Correct article usage
a round
it's
colour is golden. And Correct your spelling
its
also
it is
very expensive It is trendy and Wrong verb form
was
this
design has Add an article
a flower
flower
on Fix the agreement mistake
flowers
front
side Add an article
the front
as well as
back
side is very simple the Add an article
the back
chain
is new because I recently bought for
Correct pronoun usage
it for
brother's
wedding. When I allended marriage that Correct pronoun usage
my brother's
time
chain
was with me .I completed whole
ceremony of the wedding I Change the article
the whole
was enjoying
every movement of Wrong verb form
enjoyed
marriage
. But when I went for lunch that Correct article usage
the marriage
time
I felt I lost my chain
. That time
, I was feeling sick and nervous. I searched in all places whenever I was rooming but this
was not found.
I would request you to adjust the claim amount or if possible you should cover my gold
cost and transfer the money in
my account.
I hope you Change preposition
to
would
take Wrong verb form
will
quick
decision. Correct article usage
a quick
for
Change preposition
on
this
issue.
yours Sincerely,
Shitall Patel.Submitted by shital20802 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to break your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on one main idea. This will enhance the clarity and readability of your letter.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid using informal language such as 'I was feeling sick and nervous' - a more formal expression could be 'I was quite distressed.'
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of your letter are well-structured and appropriate, showing politeness and respect.
Task Achievement
You provided a clear description of the lost item, including its significance and appearance.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.