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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant.
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The Diagram illustrates the process for re-purposing plastic
bottles
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 used daily by the general population including water
bottles
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, shampoo
bottles
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, and more. Recycling PVA containers goes through 9 consecutive steps, starting with the plastic
waste
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 left by people and transferring that
waste
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 into processing facilities, After that, the
waste
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 goes through sorting usually by hand to make sure
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the
bottles
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 are usable or not, Following that, The rest of the viable PVA Gets compressed into blocks for easy transfer, These blocks are crushed into Very
miniscule
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minuscule
Peices
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Pieces
 that get washed to make sure of That they're pure and usable. The production of Plastic pallets is fairly simple, It begins with taking the now cleaned crushed
pecies
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species
pieces
 of
waste
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 and Working them through a device that turns them into consistent
peices
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pieces
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 that get melted
in
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 the end to
creat
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create
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 raw material that gets used in many different applications,
Including
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 making polyester clothes, creating new Packaging, And Producing more containers to use.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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