The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line chart illustrates the portions of Australian exports to 4 different countries from 1990 to 2012. At first , we can divide the four countries into two groups: the first one contains Japan and China, with the

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percentage of ships,

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the second group involves the US and India with the lowest portion of sales.

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in the first band. China had a strong rise during the period of the study, reaching a peak

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30 %,

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Japan decreased from 1990 to 2012, having a slowdown

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18% in 2012.

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, it can be seen that the US shows a peak in 2000 with 12 % of exports. India had an increase between 1990 and 2010,

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showed a decline in the

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years. In the end, the diagram shows the changes in the percentage of Australian exports in four different countries.