the chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The bar chart illustrates the various educational degrees after school in
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and the number
of Correct your spelling
Australia
men
and women
that
got them in 1999.
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Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the number of men
who got a degree
was higher than women
exept
two of them.
If we look at the details, at the top of the list for Correct your spelling
except
men
and totally
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Skilled
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the Skilled
Diploma
with 90%, at
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place
for the men
was Postgraduate Diploma
with just over Two-thirds of the percentages and Masters
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comes
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by
contrast
the following Add the comma(s)
contrast,
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in two different categories named Bachelor's Correct your spelling
percentages
degree
and Undergraduate Diploma
for men
was not as popular as for women
with approximately 45% and 35% respectively.
On the other hand
, These two categories were
the highest percentages for Verb problem
had
women
generally, with 70%, Undergraduate
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The Undergraduate
Diploma
ranked the
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first,
Bachelor's
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the Bachelor's
Degree
with 50%, was in the
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place
, and the third place
in the list was for Masters degree
with 40%. Next was Postgraduate
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the Postgraduate
Diploma
with 30%, and then
at the last
place
in the women
's chart and on the whole was Skilled
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the Skilled
diploma
with only on
tenth of the Correct your spelling
one
percantage
.Correct your spelling
percentage
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