The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives

In our contemporary era with the evolving scientific landscapes, people's perspectives towards the benefits of

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scientific discoveries are

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divergence.

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some advocate that the primary goal beyond scientific achievements must be far more than improving living standards, I would strongly argue that the main aim must be to

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the community's quality of life.

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difficulties,

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to empowering the economy by the exploited technological development. Obviously, one of the essential targets of

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scientific advancement is the ability to address the pressing global challenges.

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to say, rather than spending the resources on aimless projects, it is of paramount importance to focus on improving public

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standards.

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, owing to the astonishingly developed medicine,

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humanity

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discovered the demanded vaccine, that

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to treat Covid 19 cases in

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time.

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main factor in ending the global pandemic and quarantine events in 2020.

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boosting the general population status have insisted on the

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sustainable technology,

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economy could be enhanced.

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more job opportunities and fostering the living environment.

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the Internet and AI

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there is robust communication between community members that will strongly drive

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recovery.

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, I absolutely think ,it is far more important to make use of

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hard conditions.