The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The data presented is composed of 2 pie charts describing the average

consumption

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of energy and the resulting greenhouse gas

emissions

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in Australian houses.

Consumption

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is led in Australian households by heating at 42%, followed by

water

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heating at around 30%. With 15% of

consumption

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, other appliances

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3rd. The data found that refrigeration, lighting, and cooling all took up less than 10%

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with values of 7%, 4%, and 2% respectively. When it comes to

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,

water

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heating leads the way with almost

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of total

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at around 32%,

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other appliances took up 28%. Heating comes in next with 15% followed closely by refrigeration at 14%. At the bottom of the table comes lighting (8%) and cooling (2%). The main

consumption

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of energy in an Australian household is heating, followed closely by

water

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heating.

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heating takes up the majority of the

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, it trails

water

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heating when it comes to greenhouse gas

emissions

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. It can be noticed that refrigeration which takes up a relatively small portion of

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emits

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greenhouse gases at around double the value.