WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Introduction
the
graphic illustrates the development of Capitalize word
The
Salmon
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fish
from an egg throughout their life cycle which is Use synonyms
also
considered to be a large Linking Words
fish
species.
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Firstly
, the adult Linking Words
Salmon
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fish
travel to slow streams upper Use synonyms
river
in order to lay eggs in Use synonyms
river
reeds under small stones for nearly five to six months before the Flyfish are born, which measure 3-8cm, Use synonyms
then
they start to travel Linking Words
to
fast stream in a deep Change preposition
apply
river
for approximately four years until they grow up to Smolt Use synonyms
fish
at 12-15 cm.
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Secondly
, the Linking Words
last
stage of Linking Words
this
process is the Smoltfish moving to the open ocean for around five years where it becomes an adult Linking Words
salmon
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fish
which measures nearly 70- 76 cm. Before the process just happened again with these adults Use synonyms
Salmon
mated and moved to the slow-moving upper Use synonyms
river
to put their eggs under reed plants.
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Overall
, the life cycle of Linking Words
Salmon
is a natural operation and contains three cyclical phases, beginning with the laying of eggs and ending with the adult Use synonyms
Salmon
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fish
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, fish, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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