WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Introduction
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graphic illustrates the development of
Salmon
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fish
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from an egg throughout their life cycle which is
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considered to be a large
fish
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species.
Firstly
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, the adult
Salmon
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fish
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travel to slow streams upper
river
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in order to lay eggs in
river
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reeds under small stones for nearly five to six months before the Flyfish are born, which measure 3-8cm,
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they start to travel
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fast stream in a deep
river
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for approximately four years until they grow up to Smolt
fish
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at 12-15 cm.
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, the
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stage of
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process is the Smoltfish moving to the open ocean for around five years where it becomes an adult
salmon
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fish
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which measures nearly 70- 76 cm. Before the process just happened again with these adults
Salmon
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mated and moved to the slow-moving upper
river
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to put their eggs under reed plants.
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, the life cycle of
Salmon
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is a natural operation and contains three cyclical phases, beginning with the laying of eggs and ending with the adult
Salmon
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fish
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, fish, river with synonyms.
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