You should spend about 20 minutes on this Task. The charts show (Chart a) the average speed of urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty year period, including a future estimate; and also (Chart b) the total number of urban zones per country (in thousands.) Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and ma

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The charts show the average velocity of city traffic over a fifty-year timescale, with a forecast for the future, and

also

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the number of urban zones by country. As can be seen, the general trend is for the speed to increase and

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decrease.

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, in

France

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France,

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it rises significantly from 60

kph

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in 1970 to a peak of 86

kph

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in 1990 tailing off to a forecast of 52

kph

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in 2020.

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Similarly

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we see the USA peak at 57

kph

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in 1990, declining to 43

kph

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at the end

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. The

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and

Rusia

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Russia

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have a similar trend, rising to 56 and 72 respectively in 2010 before falling

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below the starting level.The same happens in Canada with a decline

form

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from

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69kph

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kph

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despite a peak of 73

kph

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. Chile,

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however

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however,

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fluctuates around 51

kph

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but remains static over the period. Italy, Brazil and Spain

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, show a clear rise, finishing at 58,57 and 61

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respectively. Regarding urban zones, all countries except one see predicted increases of roughly four times by 2020. The exception is

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Russia

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, which sees a fall of

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about

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a half to 3200.

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the data does not suggest any correlation between increasing urban zones and average traffic speeds.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kph with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

209 words

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